ext_1720: two kittens with a heart between them (0)
ext_1720 ([identity profile] ladycat777.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] skoosiepants 2007-03-07 07:51 pm (UTC)

You do the little touches so well -- the scene with Cadman and, presumably, her father's now-blown-up-car, the way you describe her chance at happiness; the way you get Teyla in five words or less, the one liners a fitting description of her without ever seeing her face; Rodney's want so subtly drawn, John's growing awareness. Cigarette pants.

You said before that this was self-indulgent and sometimes that means bad things. Not always. Not here. This is fantastic, twenty five snapshots of a family tattered together.

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