Her writing seems to have adapted to be easier to turn into a movie script. Am I the only one who sees this?

Nope, not alone. Her atrocious writing of HBP was why I couldn't finish it. I tried, I did. But I never could get past the Quidditch tryouts. Hermione's dip into the stupid, flighty pool made it impossible. I liked Hermione in the beginning. She was a good counter to the boys more balls to the wall attitude. But then in HBP suddenly changed. I mean, the old Hermione wouldn't have gone into the shop pretending to be Draco's girl, or anything similar. I mean, hello, I'm sure her pic has been on the paper enough, especially with Skeeter, that people would notice if she was just strolling in.

The writing got so much lazier. I'm with skoosiepants. The writing was never stellar to begin with, but now, it's just downright pathetic. I've seen better unbetaed fan fiction written by twelve-year-olds. Hermione's become an ultimate Sue at this point, and between canon and movieverse, I can't be bothered to tune in.