You put Gerard and Mikey in drag, and it appears to be justified by the plot! That is so awesome. I'm intrigued by the cryptic conversation, too, but seriously. CORSETS FTW. :D

You've somehow made me very fond of Ashlee. How did that happen? She's kind of great, though.

Brendon's reaction to Ryan cracked me up, and I love that you made Ryan a cardsharp. I'm really looking forward to this fic now, and not just because there are good odds of Spencer Smith in a low-slung gunbelt... ;)