ext_53386 ([identity profile] starflowers.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] skoosiepants 2008-06-30 05:23 am (UTC)

This was pretty much as fantastic as I knew it would be. It kinda had a different tone than your other stuff, which was pretty awesome actually, I really like it when authors can do that and always worry that I've only got 'angsty' and 'non-angsty' as the tones I can handle.

I really loved Frank, he's pretty pretty much my favourite lately and you wrote him pretty awesomely. Mikey too, was fantastic, which is weird since he wasn't even really there. I loved the way you wrote how Spencer was torn between making a new life in Vegas or clinging to the old one, because it was really realistically portrayed without being melodramatic.

I'm also kind of relieved that Spencer was upset when Gabe left. I was worried he'd just celebrate, which would make me a little sad, and the birthday party of cats was fantastic.

Also, this line:

“Pants are always a good option.” Brendon nods. “But Jon Walker never judges.”

Is pretty much the most epic line about Jon Walker that I've ever read, ever.

Oh, also, I'm glad there weren't any zombies.

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