Good snipit. Poor Hermione. Denial can make things slam into your face sometimes.
Not sure about the Britspeak. That is the one problem with writing HP fic. You aren't submerged in the culture so you really have no idea if your writing soemthing that is an americanism or something they would actually say.
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Date: 2004-11-16 11:53 am (UTC)Good snipit. Poor Hermione. Denial can make things slam into your face sometimes.
Not sure about the Britspeak. That is the one problem with writing HP fic. You aren't submerged in the culture so you really have no idea if your writing soemthing that is an americanism or something they would actually say.