Ah, just reread the note bit you wrote before posting the fic. I found the Ginny/Draco relationship a little bit distracting. Perhaps if the fic was longer you could work with the complexities of the relationship but right now it feels as if G/D is taking away from H/R/D...so maybe choose one or the other?
It's a bit like the movie Love Actually. You get a tantalizing taste of the lives of all the charecters.
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Date: 2004-12-01 08:03 pm (UTC)It's a bit like the movie Love Actually. You get a tantalizing taste of the lives of all the charecters.