Finally. The weirdass commune love story.

I can't seem to stop fiddling with this! I'm posting it, though, but don't say I didn't warn you that it's odd and flows differently than my other work and possibly skips around with tenses.

Anywho, as a favor to me, I'd like everyone to let me know if any parts just don't work at all, or you think need to be reworked. Personally, I think Draco saves the entire piece from utter crapdom.

Remember, it's an AU without magic! And I really don't think there's any clear plot.

( The Commune Love Story )

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