You have no idea how much fun I'm having reading your fic! My biggest problem seems to be the more I like a fic, the longer my feedback is. oops.
“You call him Chuck again and you die,”
I love that Patrick wouldn't want people coming up with nicknames for Charlie. cute.
I’m a stay-at-home mom with an abnormally stoic baby, and okay, I totally blame you for that, by the way, and, okay, he’d take credit for Charlie’s stoicism, but Adrian was totally responsible for that eerie staring thing he always did.
That was funny how Adrian and Patrick find things in the baby that they see in the other person.
“I’m coming out.”
Diana Ross I've read all the chapters, just going back to leave my feedback for each section now, and I liked how you used this setting a couple of times. In interviews they've said they quote an abnormal amount of 80's movies at each other, so I could *totally* see them doing something like this with song titles.
I love the help and support you show Patrick giving Brendon. It's sweet and affectionate, much like Patrick himself. :)
Ryan went on, cracking his knuckles, and that shouldn’t really have been menacing coming from a boy roughly the width of a twig, but it really, honestly was,
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Date: 2007-10-10 04:41 am (UTC)“You call him Chuck again and you die,”
I love that Patrick wouldn't want people coming up with nicknames for Charlie. cute.
I’m a stay-at-home mom with an abnormally stoic baby, and okay, I totally blame you for that, by the way,
and, okay, he’d take credit for Charlie’s stoicism, but Adrian was totally responsible for that eerie staring thing he always did.
That was funny how Adrian and Patrick find things in the baby that they see in the other person.
“I’m coming out.”
Diana Ross I've read all the chapters, just going back to leave my feedback for each section now, and I liked how you used this setting a couple of times. In interviews they've said they quote an abnormal amount of 80's movies at each other, so I could *totally* see them doing something like this with song titles.
I love the help and support you show Patrick giving Brendon. It's sweet and affectionate, much like Patrick himself. :)
Ryan went on, cracking his knuckles, and that shouldn’t really have been menacing coming from a boy roughly the width of a twig, but it really, honestly was,
Ryan being pissy and menacing cracked me up!
kerry =)