What we have right here, ladies and germs, is some grade-A, top-notch crack.
Openly staring, chewing on the end of his pen, fingers pinched around the belly like he was dying for a fag. Brilliant. I don't know why that stands out for me, but it's a marvelous description.
And I could quote the rest of the story, but I won't. :D But pretty much everything happening between Remus and Sirius just...burns. It's that smoldering.
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Date: 2005-10-09 09:48 am (UTC)Openly staring, chewing on the end of his pen, fingers pinched around the belly like he was dying for a fag.
Brilliant. I don't know why that stands out for me, but it's a marvelous description.
And I could quote the rest of the story, but I won't. :D But pretty much everything happening between Remus and Sirius just...burns. It's that smoldering.
Yeah. So a sexy little snippet.