My poor beta-reader
Aug. 30th, 2004 10:31 pmMy beta-reader, Angelique, is still patiently waiting for Chapter 18 of the Origin of Storms.
I suck at writing fight scenes! Somebody put me out of my misery! I need any advice possible on fleshing out the following scene. Please.
HOWEVER, if you don't wish to know where I'm going with the end of this story ahead of time, you might not want to read it.
( lamest fight scene ever )
I don't like mondays.
I suck at writing fight scenes! Somebody put me out of my misery! I need any advice possible on fleshing out the following scene. Please.
HOWEVER, if you don't wish to know where I'm going with the end of this story ahead of time, you might not want to read it.
( lamest fight scene ever )
I don't like mondays.