pants to match

Wow, I've managed to lose track of my betas, which is sad-making, and I'm not saying they won't show up and make me happy at some point in the next few days, but I have two fics out and I do not blame them, I don't, because, hell, life gets busy and all, but. I need some feedback here. Is there anyone willing to at least beta my long-ass Brendon Urie Coming Out fic for plot? I'm still hoping to get some grammar edits back, and I'd post it without a beta at first if I thought it didn't have plot problems, so. Anyone? Anyone who's, you know, remotely good a tactfully kicking authors' asses? I just want to get it done, you know, so I can worry about my next two fics. Which I will also most likely need a new beta for, so. I need to know how much rewriting this thing has to have, or how much additional writing or cuts it needs, and whether the end is a complete and total cop-out that doesn't work at all or something.

Also, I need to get a copy of HP7 before I get spoiled. Is that where y'all are? Reading an actual book? Psshaw. You are so cool.